Title
Think of a catchy title, e.g. “Save Time and Energy”
What problems does the gadget solve? What does it do?
The problem: Does it take you ages to get to school? Are
you tired of carrying heavy bags back from the shops?
The solution: Here is the perfect solution for you: the
Segway Human Transporter. The Segway will change your
Life and make your journey to work good fun, too.
What are the advantages of the gadget?
(design/materials/uses/convenience, etc.)
It has only got two wheels plus … The Segway is easy to
use and … One user has said … It is very convenient
and practical … It weighs only … It is easy to carry …
Its maximum speed is … Its electric battery also has a
Range of … It`s safe, too, and … The Segway is very
useful for journeys around your town … it doesn`t cause
any pollutions either!
How much is it? How can you get it?
The Segway is a bargain at only $3,000. Contact … for
More information about … !
Linking (Addition)
It is made of good quality plastic and has an attractive,
Modern design, too. It has a reliable electric motor plus a
small computer. It also weighs only ten kilos. It isn`t
expensive, either.
Useful Vocabulary
Expressions: Here is the perfect solution to all your
problems./You can use the … to …/It is made of …/It is
good quality …/It is a bargain at only …/It is excellent
value at …
Adjectives: amazing, attractive, automatic, brilliant,
cheap, compact, convenient, durable, easy (to use, carry,
etc.), exciting, fantastic, modern, perfect, pollution-free,
relaxing, reliable, useful
Materials: glass, gold, metal, nylon, plastic, silver, wood
Objects: battery, bracelet, cables, camera, computer,
earrings, electric motor, headphones, solar-powered
battery, stereo system
Checking
Content: Is you advert convincing? Can you add any
useful information about it? Can you add any adjectives
to describe your gadget?
Mistakes: Check your letter for simple mistakes.